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New format for better visual appeal!
(I guess it's too late to say this is a massive spoiler for my story, huh? Actually, not really. This isn't the actual story.)
Please provide constructive criticism regarding errors in logic, spelling, word use, pace, parallelism, sentence structure, ***missing words***, etc.!
Edit 11/20/14 -- UPDATED TO 35 PAGES!
Edit 7/4/16 -- UPDATED TO 39 PAGES! HOLY SHIT!
(I guess it's too late to say this is a massive spoiler for my story, huh? Actually, not really. This isn't the actual story.)
Please provide constructive criticism regarding errors in logic, spelling, word use, pace, parallelism, sentence structure, ***missing words***, etc.!
Edit 11/20/14 -- UPDATED TO 35 PAGES!
Edit 7/4/16 -- UPDATED TO 39 PAGES! HOLY SHIT!
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